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goli
21-12-2004, 01:47 AM
I have a lovely bunch of coconuts
I baked them in a pie
there creamy crunchie coconuts
that made my tummy cry

I tried to eat my coconuts
its shell was hard and dry
so I squashed it with a staple gun
and stirred it to a fry

wont someone eat my coconuts
there ready for the buy
there creamy crunchie coconuts
that made my tummy cry

Hypermodestmuslima
21-12-2004, 02:19 AM
OOO nice.
But I'm not too fond of coconuts, they're so dry and high in cholestrol.

Did this poem make reference to any hidden theme or something? Because all I'm getting from this poem is 'I love coconuts'

:d

VeiledOne
21-12-2004, 02:23 AM
I never seen such importance given to coconuts before.

goli
07-01-2005, 10:38 PM
well ill shine some light on it

http://www.christianforums.net/viewtopic.php?p=137890#137890 I had a poetic arguement with a guy on this forum perhaps you will understand after reading...